All Comments on 'The PI'

Real)y enjoyed this story...

99% of commentors need to STFU! stop demeaning the author. Writing like they are literary critics. WTF

Short, pointed and well told,

Good story, a good BTB

Well worth 5/5 for the short

Great story. Probably 1% of 1% do the cheated apon find out soon enough, and have the resources to have all of their ducks in a row to make the nice clean break. That is what makes this story, the fantasy of have the final uninterrupted say. It was a nice touch that the PI knew from experience the crushing pain will still haunt the vindicating hubby.

Liked it. Concise. Focused. The (brief) moment of tension that the husband would lose it was well played. Would have liked more character development but that was not the poing of this tale.

Well done, obviously. More please.

Well written, and justice served. Of course the pin dick, cucky boys are going to hate this..

short and sweet and well done

5/5!

Not a fan of these type of stories, because in real life, it doesn't happen this way

Emotional tension was very well developed.

The weapon, if not used, would be highly effective in discouraging her from contesting the divorce. Sadly, both partners corroborating each other, using the gun constitutes a felony. Not sure if the video would help unless no time lapse could be deduced. If clean, a good show.

I thought the story was well written and the end or outcome was appealing. Over my lifetime I have dealt with men and some women that experience cheating/infidelity incidents and one aspect is always true...you never know how the situation will play out. I have seen people not want to confront the cheaters. People confronting. spouses get violent etc. Sire as the sun rises all victims act differently. No one size fits all.

Some comments are enjoyable because they present what one human predicts that ALL other humans would do, have done. And the ones that get all lawyerly about the penal code.

Enjoyable story!

5

A good story, well told. D

Wow! Just wow!! 5 stars no holds bared. Bob

A good start, but where's the rest if it?

I great snapshot from a fringe players perspective

Great but not quite all there.