All Comments on 'The Pianist Ch. 02'

keep up good work

Very intriguing. Interested to see where this will go.

The story has started well enough, minor editing problems. But how to rate such short segments? Its not going to be "Gone with the Wind," but it may turn into solid story. But if one had to rate the first page of GWTW, it would be hard to do.

If the first two segments were together, I would likely think it was a good introduction.

I tend to agree with the criticisms, but don't let it bother you to much.

I like the story and your presentation and look forward to the rest of it.

Good continuation. As I said before, putting the chapters together would be better - it's a little short.

Sometimes when writing a longer piece you get to the point that you want to hit that submit button so badly, you do it before you should. I don't mind the shorter chapters but if you did put them together, you'd get less flack from the readers. The backstory, the chemistry and the character development is great. Though we don't know much about Nic yet, I kinda like him. He has a touch of bad boy with his rock and roll. Keep writing.

Another great chapter.