All Comments on 'The Pianist Ch. 09'

I read it again! It still rocks!

I thought it was pretty good and an o.k. ending. You could have described their make up sex in detail. I also think the ending was too short. I really liked chapters 1-5 - I think compared to those chapters this wasn't as good.

Great ending

Your bio says you are an editor for Literotic, but your own work very much needs an editor. Just a simple read-through before you hit SEND would have been enough for you to see the mistakes and typos. I know it's been three years since you wrote this, and there isn't anything current. (I found you in "similar stories" at the end of another story.) The story is pretty good, but your writing is sloppy. Nevertheless, I read through the whole series. But if you really want to be a good writer, you have to make sure it is readable and not unedited. When wrong words are used or there are typos, the reader's attention to the story is disturbed and that is frustrating and aggravated.