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by silverace1

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Very dishonest

Unless the pool was of oil, this is a very dishonest fantasy story. Water would quickly erase any lubrication in the fucking so that penetration would start getting somewhat hard if not painful. In water, the cock would quickly grow soft, if not from the existence of the above, but from the temperature of the water as well. This is not what I would call an honest fantasy, because it is impossible to achieve.

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