All Comments on 'The Picnic was Their Undoing'

That was absolutely beautiful. Two souls needing something that only the other could give. How could he not fall for her. How could he not give all that he had. I only wish I was he.

It is simply great, teh description of two people wnting just what the other has to offer!

How and where next? Any sequel, or were they just ships meeting on the sea, crossing paths?

Please!

(I didn't think something would come so fast after Secrets...)

Thank you

John

Hope there's a sequel in the works. My mind's already drawing out an ending, but as usual, the author knows her story's plotline best.