All Comments on 'The Pirate and The Thief Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
"Besides . . .

you've no idea what I'm doing . . . "

She said to him.

"You couldn't possibly have. It's your mind that made that conclusion."

She felt tenderness (and a little pity) for him.

She was always, at least, one step ahead of him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
What does that mean?

"One of his string arms curled around the base of her spine . . . "

"One of his string arms ... "?

He's a puppet?

A toy?

I haven't finished reading this yet, so . . .

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 11 years ago
Famous last words, I think.

Looking forward to more.

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