All Comments on 'The Plan'

the only problem i have with this he didn't have to kill him to win . a simple bullet in the leg or shoulder would have stopped any attempt to continue . being wounded would have effectively stopped him and then he could have been charged with breaking and entering and attempted assault . guaranteed jail time .

A really good story. However he should have had her served at work and not given her a heads up.

She embarrassed him for months and in public at the company party. Turn around is fair play.

I also wish he had just injured the boyfriend. That way he gets jail time and a constant reminder of how his predatory habits affected people.

I agree with consulting91 and honestly I kinda thought Kelsey could have been salvaged. Not to stay as wife, but just a reminder of what happens when you cheat. I don't like that she left her daughters life, I would have thought that would have made her strong enough to overcome.

Another "sainted" MC... I'll give her half of everything PLUS 200K from my trust even though she's been cheating on me, humiliated me at her company, and is planning on divorcing me and taking my only child from me.

Gimme a fucking break!!!

My only point of contention in your entire story is that she disappeared without a trace. That takes money, a lot of money to effectively wipe your name from the books without a trace. Unless she got in to things that took her down an even darker path, she really didn't have the means (if the story is accurate) to do so.