All Comments on 'The Plan Ch. 05'

it's about time...love revenge...hope there's another chpt...maybe talking it out and having a new found freedom in their relationship, and where it will take them....

hey hornymuse!! :))

very fun non con!! read your chapter 4 and 5 back to back!! keep giving us such a fun cycle of 'turnabouts are fair'!!:))

If I was him, would be filing for divorce.

Reasonable story line

Really bad English

Sweaty is to perspire

Sweety is pet name like honey

Big difference

I liked it but yeah some of the errors did make it harder to enjoy. Especially in chapter 4 when he kept calling her sweaty. Being sweaty and nasty is not a good thing but otherwise pretty good story I'm glad she got some revenge. I wonder who she got to come in his face LOL

“The clamps on my nipples were removed. I had almost forgotten them. It felt great to have them taken off.”

Lol, sounds like this was written by some who’s never had nipple clamps used on them.

M:M scenes don’t really do anything for me but otherwise the chapter was ok, LOTS of spelling errors though.

Tess (uk)