All Comments on 'The Playdate Ch. 01'

Even in a story where the husband is the one cheating, he’s totally clueless. He’s cheating, but somehow none of it is his fault. Martian Slut Ray on stupid setting?

Well, at least it’s different.

He will soon find out... Maybe his wife is helping Margot's husband with his problems.

Wow, some harsh criticisms in the comments. Whatever, I thought it was good fun and would be happy to read more.

Keep up the unusually perverse writing

This needs a sequel. I feel like the story is unfinished. I want him to continue to go down the rabbit hole.

Nice reverse story, but he will get caught. Cheaters always will get caught eventually, especially if the slut lives close by. The clueless wife will find him out soon enough and that slut, Margot, is too blatant in her seduction. I think the wife is NOT as clueless as I make her, she may even have something on the side too. We must wait and see.

Just finished reading your story and I was compelled to write a note and not simply assign it a score. Margot is such a wonderful character that to not compliment you with the creation would be shorting you on deserved praise.

Thanks for sharing.

If only I had a neighbor like that.

Cheating asshole.

People on this site are so strange. It's a story guys. No one is really cheating on anyone