All Comments on 'The Plaything Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
To be continued?!

Where is the next chapter? It is a perfect setting for a new office's plaything to be passed around

FatherlyneedFatherlyneedalmost 7 years ago
Not as good as first chapter but ...

Still very worthwhile writing. The first chapter is a hard one to follow. It was, in my mind, nearly perfect.

Still a god follow up to the action of the first chapter. And, a needed conclusion? or will it be a bridge to another ... chapter ?

Thank you.

autoplotautoplotalmost 7 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment. I know the second chapter doesn't meet the standards of the first. It's one of the things that's kept me from continuing the series for awhile. I want to make it worthwhile. I hope to get to it soon. :)

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I write unbelievable stories with believable characters, or at least as believable as I can. I am fascinated by incest taboo, especially father/daughter, so that's mostly what I write about. My output here has slowed, but I still write and post when I can. Thanks to everyone ...

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