by NovusAnimus
Oooooo these twins are gonna introduce radical new concepts to hell like "doing things for others" and "socialism"
“Cooperation makes things happen. Cooperation, working together!” What an odd idea! Why, next thing you know, they’ll start having elections and expecting to vote or something! Thank you for sharing your talents with us. This is so cool! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏
Really liking the male MC, too often this type of character is quite boring. The sister i feel like i won't like as much but it's early to say.
First time commenting on your stories, and I’ve read almost all of them.
I’m really looking forward to seeing how this story line develops.
The world building is outstanding and most characters are already fleshed out (thanks to A Taste of Hell).
David and Mia are mostly normal, flawed people. I like that.
You adhere to classic storytelling in many ways, which I find promising.
I like where you’re going with this very much so far. Really looking forward to reading the next part.