All Comments on 'The Pleasures of Submission Ch. 02'

I like the slow domination of her mind and body.

Dee,

Wonderful job of slowly bringing her around to submission by her white Boss!

It seems you are not learning from previous comments to correct your grammar.

Nice work!

Any grammatical errors, although not unnoticed, did not detract from the story as far as I was concerned. I thoroughly enjoyed the progression of the relationship as you very aptly described it. I think that this was a good example how racist remarks need not be offensive, depending on the circumstances and the intentions of both the giver and the receiver. Clearly both parties in this story find their experience enhanced by the difference in their color.

I am loving this. The sex is spectacular although I can't help but feel a bit intimidated by a 12 inch cock! What I like is the way you are playing with the interracial things. I can't wait to get to the next entry and see where you go with the Ds parts. YOu are setting them up so well.

Really, really well constructed story. Characters. Sex. Raceplay. Psycho-emotional, physio-sensual elements. Though I agree with the nagging about editing needed, as a Black woman, I'm immersing myself in this story and find it immensely, intensely arousing. Can't wait to get on to the coming chapters.