All Comments on 'The Pleasures of Submission Ch. 04'

I continue to enjoy her internal struggle with her need to submit and the humiliation she feels from submitting.

Can't wait for next installment. It was what my first marriage sould have veen

More please. More, more, more!

PLease write more and do some bondage!

Well written and a good story.

Please write more, I'm interested to see what happens next.

Enjoyed it tremendously. I love how you address the racial issues honestly and straightforward even though it is fiction. Pretending that it is not there makes it an elephant in the room, but the way you address it makes them closer to one another and real. Love her coming to terms with her submissive nature mixed in with all the other dimensions.

Well Miss I can tell you, you have my attention. Just wondering if you are ever going to write more?

Thank you for what you have written. An this white guy from the next state west will be looking for more

I want to continue this narrative with you: I will be your on-line Master, and you will be my beautiful black slave.

Take the chance, respond now! Luv, Max