All Comments on 'The Plumber'

Nice little tale (tail) of exhibitionism and if it were not for the misuse of language it would be even better. I have the same issue when I write so I am not being "cruel" but hopefully positively critical. Love to see more of your erotic mind.

Great story and I love your accent.

The basis of the story is reasoanbly good. My main issue is the lack of editing, the use if local terms which although English words are not well placed within their sentences. It detracts from the story, and often leaves one trying to work out what you mean, rather than enjoying the tale.

Get an editor, or have another member review and correct your work before publishing.

Loved your story. Hope you follow sharing your texts with us.

Loved this and the slightly foreign lilt to the English language adds to its erotic nature for me. Looking forward to reading more of your stories Amanda!