All Comments on 'The Point Of No Return'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Briella will always be remembered

I met her once she was a stunning person

sinfully_hevanlysinfully_hevanlyover 12 years ago
Innuendo!

I love your use of innuendo in this story. I could "see" everything and yet your language was not vulgar.

Beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Well done.

Well written with passionate class and sensuality. It flows carrying the reader into the place of sexual realization you've created. Kudos. Keep it up!

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