All Comments on 'The Pokédex Ch. 01'

Wrong category, sci fi fantasy

Actually it does fit into the Non-Consent category because the main character was not a consenting partner in the Tentacruel’s fucking of her. But this story would also fit into Sci-Fi, Nonhuman, or Celebrities and FanFiction categories.

Aisielynn is right, it does fall under a number of different categories. I was originally planning on putting it under fanfiction, because it's pokemon, but I thought that the non-consent/reluctance category would be better suited for the content of the chapter.

But I have had the priveledge and pleasure of sex below the water's surface, and consistently found that lubrication was required. The girl's or woman's natural lubrication was never enough, even with plenty of foreplay, to allow me to enter very far, although God knows my partner was willing. These scenes depicting sex under water are true fiction. Vaseline works great, because unlike the natural lubricant produced by the lady, Vaseline is not water soluble. You can begin when the sun goes down and enjoy each other until dawn. One other thing. Be sure the water is clean. Vaginal infections and irritations can result from enjoying each other in unclean water.

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