All Comments on 'The Ponytail Express Ch. 03'

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Carpenter91Carpenter91almost 3 years ago

I really enjoyed your story so far and can't wait for more!!

Timtom12Timtom12almost 3 years ago

I like it, so much potential. Hope it keeps fun and doesn't go down some governmental secrets path.

Professor_XXXProfessor_XXXalmost 3 years ago

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I'm loving this series, please keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'll keep reading because the writing is fine and the setting new and interesting. But her reaction here is highly unrealistic.

SniperkingSniperkingabout 2 years ago

have to agree with Anon. Her reaction really broke my immersion. Also him trying to relax control on Deb's. Its a good idea its just the delivery was bad. He can't morally justify what he's doing and he's still changing her no matter what he says

2WET2TURN22WET2TURN2over 1 year ago

They need to fuck for good measure!

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