by A_Gavin_MaCross29
I like it, so much potential. Hope it keeps fun and doesn't go down some governmental secrets path.
I'll keep reading because the writing is fine and the setting new and interesting. But her reaction here is highly unrealistic.
have to agree with Anon. Her reaction really broke my immersion. Also him trying to relax control on Deb's. Its a good idea its just the delivery was bad. He can't morally justify what he's doing and he's still changing her no matter what he says