All Comments on 'The Ponytail Express Ch. 07'

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TSreaderTSreaderover 2 years ago

Another great addition to this story. Thank you!

devildog0302devildog0302over 2 years ago
Starting to lose interest

The story seems to loosing focus and momentum

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story is boring the CRAP out of me. If it is going somewhere, PLEASE get the fuck there soon! Just skimmed the last two chapters, and could just barely manage to do that. Must be a case of "different strokes for different folks", as some seem to be enjoying it. Whatever. I think this is a demonstration of why mind-control stories should not involve wimpy-guy main characters who are overly subservient to their girlfriend. This guy should be fucking every girl in sight, for Christ sake. If something interesting doesn't happen soon I will give up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ha! Haters gonna hate...

Well I happen to love the adventure and plot additions. I sometimes wonder why fools feel the need to express their own negativity as if it mattered to anyone else but themselves..

Keep going.. please.

RuckinLguardRuckinLguardover 2 years ago

Well played on the trigger for Detective Rogers!

servant111servant111over 2 years ago

I don't get it...last page seems to be a repeat of episode... Plus way too many plot tricks and way too little plot advancement.... almost no action now ....getting really boring

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