All Comments on 'The Ponytail Express Ch. 13'

Lots of very yummy fun in this chapter! Thank you!

Just great work

Really appreciate what ur doing here.. most mind control erotica is straight vicious.. and ur putting an exciting story along with it along with a little smut .. thank u for this entertaining story I hope there is allot more to cum

Gavin, but what’s happening with their softball competition?

Please don’t make us wait too long for chapter 14

Lol @ Bruce.

My only niggle is that sometimes the dialog is hard to follow, like it's hard to know who's saying what. I find myself having to work, a bit, to deduce the speaker.

On the whole, a fine tale.

Great series...