All Comments on 'The Pool'

I really enjoyed this story so so much. I hope to know what happened then. I think there life may completely change. I hope if this will be a beginning of a series. am waiting for more. Thanks for your effort to make your readers happy.

Madoc

This is an excellent story - well done and look forward to reading more.

Up till then it wasn't too bac but was a bit confusing and improbable.

That was good! Nice for a firstimer.

Kept up the suspense until the end, as to who was fucking whom.

Just a bunch of animals without human feelings.