All Comments on 'The Porn Artist Ch. 02'

Really like this story, can’t wait to see more

Why is Robert so painfully unconfidant. It makes it awkward and uneasy to read. Mason clearly pushed the issue of sex with Robert so why is Robert so upset that he fucked it up?

I thought the awkwardness was a crucial component in the story feeling more real. It helps you really connect with the character and put yourself in their shoes. Beautifully written erotic short-story. I've read hundreds of stories here on Literotica, and this was the first story so eloquently and deliberately put together that I forgot it was an erotic story and found myself needing to continue reading line after line. It was also the first time I felt compelled to leave a review and give a star rating. I do hope you continue this story on here but more importantly pursue writing if you aren't already. 5☆s ❤