by EmilyMiller
So is this dysfunctional guy saved by a good woman theme going to be an ongoing one for you? Or does your savior complex only run to two stories? And where is my lesbian JOI story? P
I enjoyed it. Great length. Long enough to let you get descriptive and set the scene. Good pacing and the story built up well. Good work.
@P_Anderer - thank you so much for saying. Reactions so far have been - to say the least - variable. Em
@PrettyAmelia - I have a 20 part series in mind. Hold your horses on the JOi or I’ll write about you having a skin infection. Em
I stopped in from the AH coffee shop to read your story. I enjoyed it and marveled at the flow and intensity of the self-doubting lines your character has used to convey his feeling. Interestingly enough, I submitted a story today for posting that has a porn theme embedded within it. Not anything as good as this one, though. It's interesting how lives and events intersect on Lit. Good work Em. I'll check your other stories, time permitting.
@Smarthomanid2 - thanks and glad you liked it. I’ve had people say that I’m midway between PSE and GFE IRL. Em
@dmallord - nice to see AHers here 😊. Thank you for the encouraging feedback. Em
Remind me to use "timpani of my heart" some time. Though I think I prefer "thump." :-)
Em, loved your endnotes. And, you pushed all the right buttons in your three page fuckfest
@lc69hunter - glad you liked it. This one was less popular than many lf my stories, but I quite like it. Em
Another great story Em.
The self doubt and uncertainty of the man is totally understandable.
The sex, as always from you, is Hot.
And the ending was a nice touch.
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Anything you write deserves a five star, even if it is something you wrote for someone else. You make the dialogue very real and credible, the sex just too good to be true, and when I read your stories I have images of you being the female character, always.
@Will527 - been a while, hun. Thank you 😊. I very much had the lady in question in mind when writing, but we aren’t totally dissimilar physically. Em
Just such wonderful writing, particularly a persons internal dialogue which as always is done with insight, and humor. This is simultaneously incredibly hot and incredibly sweet. Five stars only because I can't give it more.
Sorry for the double comment here - just have had time to really digest. This was so well written and thank you for including the ending - the real human experience of the female main character and how she is looking for friendship and yes, sex is something she enjoys but she need not be put into that box as that happens far too often with sex workers. Thank you for this