All Comments on 'The Potter's Studio'

WOW, what a magnificent story! Expertly written. I simply couldn’t stop reading until I finished the story. (2 hours later than usual) I’ve been reading these stories for several years and no other submission ever engaged that desire to finish the entire piece. Storyline, characters, changing dynamics were absolutely PERFECT!!

Needs proofreading as character names get mixed up a few times. Sex was hot though.

Thanks @bienclar. I agree and submitted an edited version a couple of days ago. Hopefully that's uploaded soon. Thanks again for taking the time to read through.

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Thanks, @Dpj49. I had a lot of fun writing this one, getting Jeremy to experiment for the sake of pleasure while growing and learning into a new profession. I am really happy you enjoyed it.