by shaqrach2
Really nice to see this story back up, love the way you describe the characters. Keep it up!
Thanks.
Casteller1985
After almost 2 years there hopefully is much more to come in a short time.
I think this series is great. But I also think, when you describe onwards in this speed, you die before you can end up this series. You have to sum things that are similar up to not reapeat yourself. But when something ist really new, it ist totally ok to describe in detail.
In my opinion he should make more males to his slaves - mainly for his security. He should make them all wear chastity belt around their useless penisses.
Also he should mark his slaves as his with piercings, tattoos and brandings. Maybe he should have a female piercer/tattoo artist in his harem...
Just some ideas...
PS: when he has enough male slaves, he should take them to make Steve his slave, too, under very much violence. As a sign of his complete submission he has to clean his wife.
fell out chair when got to see another chapter after year+ rated 5 stars before even read it
Seriously, this was the best you could come up with after 2 years? You could have copied and pasted this from any other story and saved yourself the time of phoning it in.
At some point I know jeffs not a monster but how is he going to get Debbie's Daugher back from From Steve.
Please don‘t make us again wait so long. We are very eager...