All Comments on 'The Precocious Swede'

What does the title have to do with the story? WHY did it stop at that point, oh "it has been 7 months and she thinks about her lost friend every day"? A cruel cliffhanger. A real romance on literotica would have written pages and pages of how they came back together again. Develop this story out! I'm not trying to be mean but please only look at this as constructive. Take my advice and this story would be good.