All Comments on 'The Predator'

Magic cock? Really? Nope.

Instantly became one of my favorites. Please continue this. I want to read more and see what his next victim will be.

He literally kisses her a few paragraphs before he "does something he's never done before" and kisses her?

very well written. It would be nice to hear about his next rape

Aww. Im shipping them both! Make this a long story! Great story btw!

God that's hot

Great story. I like the realism here

Either she gets pregnant and convinces the boyfriend that it's his or she leaves her boyfriend after she finds out that she's preggy and gets with the rapist who fathered her child.

To be able to trade places would be a dream come true

Because she will have two lovers the same day, she could possibly get pregnant with twins. From separate fathers. Thay would be HOT. And he could come back and take her pregnant.

Please continue to keep my interest as I think you have A great character and a wonderful story line with so many avenues to pursue that I can't wait for the next installment. GET BUSY! (Love your work and want more!)