All Comments on 'The Predator'

by ridgegirl04

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nope.

Magic cock? Really? Nope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I really love this. Please more

Instantly became one of my favorites. Please continue this. I want to read more and see what his next victim will be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

He literally kisses her a few paragraphs before he "does something he's never done before" and kisses her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

very well written. It would be nice to hear about his next rape

Yunalesca88Yunalesca88over 3 years ago

Aww. Im shipping them both! Make this a long story! Great story btw!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
hot

Great story. I like the realism here

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It's hot how he took her without any protection

Either she gets pregnant and convinces the boyfriend that it's his or she leaves her boyfriend after she finds out that she's preggy and gets with the rapist who fathered her child.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fucking hot

To be able to trade places would be a dream come true

Ellienora35Ellienora35over 2 years ago

Because she will have two lovers the same day, she could possibly get pregnant with twins. From separate fathers. Thay would be HOT. And he could come back and take her pregnant.

wHATFRAt72wHATFRAt72over 1 year ago

Please continue to keep my interest as I think you have A great character and a wonderful story line with so many avenues to pursue that I can't wait for the next installment. GET BUSY! (Love your work and want more!)

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