All Comments on 'The Predators Ch. 05'

Oh wow. Another great part and this story is building up better and better. But why she cares for mason? As far as I thought should we easily drop him.

Ahhhh - it was just getting good. Anxiously awaiting the next installments. Your way with words and dialogue is unparalleled.

Eagerly awaiting the next part! But at the same time concerned for Faye and hoping she makes it out.

Expect theyhgJrME will send a video to Vick of Fay being worked over. What’s happening to Mason, who will rescue them?

Re: Surferchick88's comment: She has history with Mason, romantic, sexual history. It's natural to care for him. As for where the story is going, hmmm. Have you written yourself into a corner? No, you're too good for that.

Poor Fay. We're all rooting for her, but it really does look as if she's going to be raped, possibly repeatedly. Short Psycho has already done his electrodes thing, so he'll design some other torture for Fay, and he'll have a careless moment and then boom! We're down to taller psycho!

What they didn't realize is that Mason has a new Apple Watch, and he sends out a text using his watch to alert the Rain boys, who worship their brilliant lawyer. They rescue Mason, but not Fay...using the occasion to enjoy her still chained body, raising the total of rapists Fay endures by a fair amount, all of this unbeknown to Mason. Mason then alerts Vic who rescues Fay and arrests Taller Psycho, and in a moment worthy of Hitchcock or Rod Serling, ends up defending Tall Psycho in court! (Fay killed Short Psycho, so no need to defend him!) A broken, ruined Fay comes into court to give testimony, which begins the healing process. --JB

PS: Another five stars for this part from me!

i really want it to stay dark.. maybe she never escapes

My guess is Mason set this all up as a way to get her. Psychos get a go first as a thank you.

And, yes...keep it good and dark please.