All Comments on 'The Price'

by jman_bigdaddy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Double Spacing

Your double space between makes it hard to read. Halfway through the first page, I gave up reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Absolutely love it! Need a body suit like that for myself

liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago
i liked it

it was fun to read and Halloween sexy. four stars and well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

Haters gonna hate. I don’t know what the previous commenter was posting about, but if good grammar and making the format easier to read bothers them, they should go to one of the trashier sites. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Enjoyable

Being sufficiently different from the usual fare sustained my interest throughout. I thought having one of the girls opting out near the end was clever. A solid four star rating from me. I don't give many fives!

I feel a bit sorry for the previous Anon, as it must be difficult not being able to read articles that are double spaced. I hadn't even noticed until it was mentioned.

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