All Comments on 'The Priest'

This is a very hot beginning, with the priest exerting his power over the couple before him. But this VERY badly needed a proofreading, as the constant errors were a distraction from your story. Comma use, for example, was all but nonexistent. I could point out many more errors, but instead I'll ask that you find an editor for chapter two. Thanks.

Pretty stupid lol

Fantastic story wish there was more

I wpuld like to see a part 2 please

Great story,so so want to hear more

Great story of a Catholic priest doing what they do; turn out young couples to sex with priest and nuns. I was 11 when a Father at my church showed me his love after church on Sunday.