All Comments on 'The Prince Ch. 04'

You have written this chapter with a depth that even I can't begin to fathom. The structure is very well composed.... almost like poetry lol. Anyway, a brilliant piece of art and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Always looking for updates... One of my favorite stories on this site

every chapter gets better and better and i love how you tell us his backstory!

Huh, I had it in my head that he was in his thirties at least but then on the ship when the captain found him to be early twenties I thought it was someone else!

Just to clarify, he was only supposed to appear younger not actually be younger. I apologize if this was confusing. I have not forgotten his age and at it is just shy of thirty as I stated in the third chapter. Hope that this makes the story less confusing.

I can't get enough of your story!!! Thank you so much for writing it.

That last sentence gave me chills!

My heart skipped several beats throughout the story!