by Messineymar
I really love this author and the stories he/she posts. Good one keep it up.
Although there are a feq areas to improve upon but overall it was a well thought idea and good narration made it better.
Many of your stories are in the making please make more parts so that it becomes enjoyable.
The story telling was great but could improve in describing the sex part. Maybe more on build up also. Overall I found this one a story worth reading.