All Comments on 'The Princess and Her Brother'

The Marcus part was unecessary.

I loved this story and hope for more chapters down the road. keep up the good work.

Well done. Exceptionally imaginative and the observations made by the narrator added the perfect spice although I would have enjoyed hearing the narrator's ultimate enjoyment of her tale. It's good to see a submission from you once again. A great writer who should not deprive us of her craft. Thank you.

Excellence in story formation and awaiting for more to come up

Maybe Markus could be brought in as a potential suitor for Reinette? He seems a capable lover, and with some maturity a more developed body (complete with a sexy splash of chest hair) for the future Queen?

Like the story a lot. AAAA++++

Utterly fucked a great story by including Markus. For no reason. More is not merrier in some instances, like this one. Could have been great. Instead, quite mediocre. Sorry, just calling it how I see it. Such a shame….

Great to see you back! I really enjoy your work -

and have missed your submissions for too long a time.

Markus? Really? The story is weak enough without adding a man to defile the princess. Do princes and princesses actually say 'yeah'? A nice try, I suppose.

Fortsetzung bitte einfach zu kurz um eine echte Entscheidung zu Fällen ob die Geschichte gut oder schlecht ist als Teil 1 einer Serie super

Why did you have to add Markus, you just ruined it