by MissAllison
I rarely read much of a story. I try to get the idea of where the writer is coming from, and then I skip ahead. I didn't do that here. I read to the afternotes, and then skimmed those. Your story-telling style held my attention.
Strange & Lovely
An intoxicating blend of porn, LSD, and Campfire Girls. Suspension of belief required and nearly effortless. A charming and enchanting first effort.
Very good story telling… like the build and the characters that are blended in…