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harryblarryharryblarryover 1 year ago

good start.. I'm looking forward to the other chapters in this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

it was stupid where was the torture

IncubusStoriesIncubusStoriesover 1 year agoAuthor

The torture will be starting up next chapter, this was all about the build up

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 1 year ago

5 years of pain but no lasting damage? Then he’s whipped. You know whips leave scars, right? And then chpt 3 is castration. Again, permanent damage. And how long is he going to be muscular if he doesn’t get to workout, eat the right proteins and carbs?

Listen dude, you’re an idiot. I get that; but if you don’t know the subject matter then stop writing.

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Hi, my name’s Rhys and I produce new short stories every week specialising in gay and femdom. I also write series. I’m not picky in my subject as long as a male sub is involved.

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