All Comments on 'The Prisoner Exhibition Model 03'

by MelanieK

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Well written - Loved the suspense

Well written, loved how the story gradually built. Great work. Please keep it up.

bondageanddisciplinebondageanddisciplinealmost 17 years ago
I think I love Sabine

I agree with the previous reviewer about the suspense. VERY well done. And Sabine is still my favorite model of all time. PLEASE write more stories about Sabine and her girlfriend! Even if she doesn't have another showing, I think Sabine's girlfriend could find other excuses to show off Sabine nude, in public and in bondage. Perhaps at some sort of charity slave auction?

SchlankSchlankalmost 17 years ago
Melissa needs to do this more often

Melissa needs to find an excuse to do this to Sabine again. This was just TOO EROTIC to be a one time thing!!

ErotonautErotonautabout 16 years ago
Fantasy come true

Nicely built-up, as Sabine realises Melissa is serious and that her pussy will soon be on view to all. That her mask then comes loose is genius (would Michelle have taken it off if not?). Of course, it's soon obvious Sabine is getting off on her exposure.<br>

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How about a follow-up in which Sabine gets her own back on Melissa? Maybe with a naked male model stripping the bound artist in public, and then teasing her with his rock-solid cock?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow! Melanie, beautifully written....

I could feel Sabine's embarrassment, with Melissa smiling as she pulls the side-tie strings on Sabine's bikini. Sabine's embarrassment was delicious, I loved it. Very very sexy! I would love to read more about Melissa and Sabine, it was that good...

fitntrimfitntrimover 6 years ago
brilliant!

oh soo loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I loved every tension filled mounting of the story and the increasing humiliation/pleasure. I so wished I was Sabine.

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