All Comments on 'The Prisoner Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Amazing. Please make him wear a humiliating prison uniform

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great Chapter 1

I look forward to reading more. I love a good prison story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love it. Hoping to find more. Wish I were him!

GayKatGayKatover 1 year ago

Wow! A Hot Sexy Warden!

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Hallo Jamie!

She's a woman after my own heart. ... Nothing like that fucking bitch at Schwarzau Prison, in Austria....... Well, so far that is!

Thank-you, 5-Stars and 5-Shocking/Humiliating Orgasms,,, Yes!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

mash my forehead on a sharp corner of the wall

and suddenly I find myself in the sky where I see myself lying

on the floor with a gaping hole in your head where the color of life escapes

the babysitters will be happy to take pretty selfies

but probably disappointed that the game must be over

but this end is me who chose it

I'm going towards the light to join my parents, my friends

happy and with a light heart to leave this world here below

Don't cry because the bitterest tears are the ones that flow in your heart

Which trickle down your soul laden with remorse and old grudges

Death, often just, strikes men at every moment with such fervor

That they are already in the arms of asrael, pleading in the face of so much pain

Abandon themselves defeated for a future in a better world.

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