All Comments on 'The Problem With Immortality Ch. 23'

Definitely a different story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and the throwbacks to pop media. I will say that most of the chapters didn't belong in non-erotic, but it was easier to locate. Again, thanks for sharing!

I abandoned this about the time all the migration to animal bodies started. When i saw the chapter tagged 'happy ever after' I looked back and got confused by the tags -- did the main characters actually kill themselves off???

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So I started again a couple of submissions from the end, and found the story had gotten much better and everyone alive and happy.

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Mr. Martin: you would make a great improvement by cutting a great chunk before the last quarter or so. Hope you are not being paid by the word! 😉

It wasn't fate, it was the Matrix. Shakespeare knew it 400 years ago. "All the world’s a stage,

And all the men and women merely players". The lines have been written and the actors merely read their parts.

Very well done. 5 stars.

A great book. If you research Agartha u will find beings in the centre of the earth that are 10k yrs old. The channel Bashar says there are 5 universal laws.

1. I exist. 2. EVERYTHING is right here right now. 3. The All is one and the One is All.

4. What u put out u get back. 5. The only constant in the universe is Change, except for the first 4 laws which never change. Scientists know that the human body is a self regenerating system built to last for 100s of yrs. Its only the poisons in the food that limit lifespan. Check Gregg Braden.