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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Stopping a bit too soon for the end

I would have liked to have a bit more detail on what happened toward the end of her orgasms and what the doctor and nurse were doing, thinking, and saying after the checkup. It kind of just ended. What were her thoughts? Why did she just cum over and over again? Was she a bad person? Well, we will find out more in the next several chapters how they are going to ensnare her into a lot of humiliation, degradation, and abuse. Hopefully the twins will be able to continue their education without them finding out what their mom is going through (and that is one of the blackmail items they will use on her). Then, again, maybe they would star in a movie with their mother without them really knowing it. Good start.

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My apologies. Chapter 40 and the Epilogue of my story The Product will be delayed. I recently became ill and I don't have ready access to a computer, nor the energy to focus on writing or editing. I will complete the story as soon as I possibly can. Again, my apologies. B...

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