All Comments on 'The Professor and Her Student'

Loved the story. Hope you continue it or write future stories around this couple. Thanks

Begins well. But once the sex begins it moves too fast. She doesn't have him do much with her body except eat her pussy.

No breast playing/kissing/sucking/tit fucking. Except for one quick, not well described, handjob she doesn't toy with his cock. She doesn't taste his cock. She doesn't milk it slowly without letting him cum -- a perfect opportunity for the begging she says she likes.

She doesn't do anything to his balls or his asshole.

She doesn't have him tongue her asshole. She doesn't finger his ass/prostate to see if he likes it or not. If he doesn't, she doesn't force him to keep licking while fingering her to multiple orgasms.

She doesn't have him describe what he likes about her body. She doesn't ask him if he masturbates thinking about her, and if so, what thoughts are the most exciting.

The dressing up as a maid is a downer -- at least the way it's described here

Then the pain begins. And, frankly, it really ruins the eroticism for me.

And you need a proofreader/editor. "I'll know if you peak or even try to peak..." You mean PEEK, not PEAK.

Gave it three stars.

More!!!!

I look forward to more stories from this writer. I remember, too many years ago to say, how one of my high school teachers in England, Miss M......., chose me quite often to clean the blackboard etc., after class. she was very authoritative and stood no nonsense and had a wicked look to her. As was customary she referred to me by my surname and ordered me to move some books from her desk. By accident, I knocker her purse (Eng. handbag) onto the floor and a few thigs fell out, including a tampon. I picked it up to put it on the desk and she came over and slapped me hard around the face three times, telling me never to touch her 'things'. I masturbated that night but never again did she hit me - oh how I wish. I shall "think" about her tonight!

Well done first story!

Could benefit from some editing, but the core story is sexy and overall, the writing is very good!

You kept my erotic attention for all four pages.....

Looking forward to reading more!

I don't know if I read with hazy eyes and am just emotionally responding. But, that's so hot.

Such a good narrative that enabled the reader to fit in. The repition of the dominance, desire to submit, and staging of the relationship aspects seemed to make any gaps or story oddities fade away.

I hope you write further adventures about this kinky couple.

more please

Really good.

Now this is D/S done right! This is what I spend so much time looking for, on Literotica, but almost never find. Professor Starr may want to totally dominate Mathew, she may want to enslave him, she may want to own him body and soul, but she also likes him, cares about him, and wants him to be happy in his slavery to her. In so many, most stories really, in the BDSM category, the femdom male slave ones anyway, they seem to be about some version of: let's see just how miserable we can make the slave. Let's beat him bloody until he can't even stand. Let's kick him in the balls as hard as we can, several times. Let's shove horse size, and bigger dildos up his ass and leave them there for extended periods. Sex with the slave? Oh hell no, we've got to find a bull for that. Orgasm for the slave? Sure, at half past the 12th of never. Don't speak unless you're spoken to. Don't dare to ever look at mistress. Let's get a bunch of other women involved who all seem to hate the slave as much as mistress seems to. I could go on and on. I'm not sure what, about any of that, is appealing. Now, in this story, Professor Starr actually wants sex, and sexual interaction, from her slave. She just wants it her way, but she actually enjoys it, and she enjoys it with him, and she makes sure he enjoys it too. She may use a bit of pain and/or bondage, either for his correction, for her own amusement, to remind him that he is a slave, or some combination of all three, but never to excess, never more than he can handle, and she always comforts him and shows him affection afterwards. In short, she actually likes and cares for Mathew, her slave. What a novel concept there. One can actually enslave someone and still care about, and, maybe even, respect them???? I always find I am tempted to comment more on the other commenters than the story itself, so here goes. The second commenter, an anonymous who led off with: "Interesting premise." I really have to wonder if we were reading the same story. He writes: " She doesn't have him do much with her body except eat her pussy." Really? I will admit I would like to see a little more variety than we actually get, but I find more here than most stories in the BDSM category. They kiss, quite often. The first thing she has him do is worship her breasts. She has him remove her panties with this teeth. There is boot worship. They fuck, and fairly often. She plays with his nipples. She uses her body to tease him in various ways. There's probably a few other things I am forgetting, but still, a lot of variety for a short story. Then this commenter has a whole list of other things the author didn't include. Honestly, it's a pretty good list and I would love to have seen some of it. Really, I'd like to see any femdom male slave themed stories with much of that in them. If the anonymous commenter, or anybody else, can name any stories like that, I'd love to hear about them. Back to this story; I'd have to guess that the author squeezed as much good stuff in as he could within the length of a story he wanted to write. The anonymous commenter writes: "The dressing up as a maid is a downer -- at least the way it's described here." Really? How would you suggest it be described? This is about the only time I've seen feminization used in a way I did like. Usually they want to have the slave dress full time in women's clothing probably including heels and makeup. Remove all traces of masculinity and turn him into a sissy maid who they then expect to suck cocks all the time. Well screw that! in this story, Professor Starr uses it very sparingly, one time in fact, and then only as a humiliation, and, probably, because she knew he would resist, giving her an opportunity to physically enforce her dominance. Genus! The anonymous commenter writes: "Then the pain begins. And, frankly, it really ruins the eroticism for me'" Really? Maybe you just better stay away from the BDSM catagory. The pain described in his story was about as restrained, and appropriate, as I've ever seen in a BDSM story. The anonymous commenter writes: "And you need a proofreader/editor." I thought this was a pretty clean story, and I've yet to see a story in Literotica that was perfect in that regard. Maybe the reason I didn't notice much in the way of errors was because I found the story so compelling I was thinking about the story rather than any errors. Is this story perfect No. Even I have one complaint. The part where she rides him down and ropes him from horseback, multiple times. This gives me chills, and not in a good way. Sooner or later, one of two things is going to happen, neither of them good. The lariat catches him around the neck, and that's not going to end well. The lariat slips down and catches him around the ankles slamming him down, face first, into a big sharp rock. Also not going to end well. If you exclude that... well... Professor Starr, Professor Starr, where are you? I need you. I need to be yours! Five stars! Five stars! Five stars! Five stars. Now you've got twenty stars!

Always good to find the woman in charge. So much the natural born leader and of a younger man, always satisfying. I preferred the build-up the actual execution as it were, less is always more I find. You are welcome to read some of my offerings along a similar theme though perhaps slower burners than here. Looking forward to more of your writings.

Premise OK -- to begin with.

Too much 'punishment' and pain for my taste in the last two pages.

Sex scenes like a shopping list. Tick them off one by one.

You wrote: "Stroking his cheek as she pulled away from him, slipping the leash between her fingers until she had pulled it taught." You meant TAUT.

Three stars.

I want to echo the sentiments of Femdomlover1 that this is a great story of Fembom where the Mistress/lover was completely dominant but not abusive, hateful or mentally and physically unsafe with her sub. I especially like that she moderates her femdom so that she doesn't wear him out, that she mixes gentleness in with the harder stuff, and that he is allowed to cum occasionally without suffering long term in a chastity cage. Well done. Thanks for writing this story.