All Comments on 'The Professor's Payback'

You start off in the past tense, but keep switching.

Please proof-read before submitting.

Captured some true elements of competitive women. Marcus benefited from being in right place at the right time...twice.

I would like to read a follow up to this if you would please write one

A proofreading should be done before publishing your story. The word "professor" is too often in the text making it look like you (the author) are a craving teenager for your teacher.

I read literotica for grammar and tenses because the intense sex like you write about does nothing for me. But when someone writes about tenses I get off and when they talk about grammer oh la la. Where do these people come from. Great story. Write more. Fuck the grammar or grammer or gramar or what ever and fuck her pretty asian ass.

very nice