All Comments on 'The Proposition Ch. 02'

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BGeorgeBGeorgeover 13 years ago
Need more background

I'm liking the story so far, but we need more background info on Chris and Stacey's prior relationship to fully understand the dynamics here. Were they actually together? Why didn't the stay together? Does Chris love Jill, too? If Jill is as liberated as you describe, why is she in the dark?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

If she is so open and understanding then why is he keeping it a secret? Because he knows that this crosses the line.

blueyedbobblueyedbobabout 13 years ago
don't understand

if his wife is a swinger and finds women for 3 somes and orgies,,why is she still in the dark about this current situation? enjoying the story but that question keeps nagging me,,

island_manisland_manabout 13 years agoAuthor
Because it was too limited.

It is plainly obvious from the text that she wanted threesomes to happen only at her own pace and choosing. The guy wanted more, and, he happened to be in love with Stacey.

Which is why he wanted to keep it his little secret,

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Double standard and self deception

Not consistent. Why spend the first half describing group scenarios followed by reluctance?

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 5 years ago

They could have fucked on the sofa and got an early start

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