All Comments on 'The Proposition Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wasted sperm

I think our hero wasted his load. I personally would have preferred a more intense period of denial as they prepared for the first "natural" injection of sperm into the lovely Stacey. I would think she would have been very aware of the fact and enjoyed getting into helping him build up the sperm count, especially after the conversation about load size, and teased him to a point of overflowing. I could imagine a conversation with Jack while thick strands of cum dangled from the big cock and Stacey smiled her approval of his devotion to duty. I am enjoying this drama and hope the author doesn't mind my own randy thoughts.

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 5 years ago

Hope Jack doesn't give her a baby bump. Chris needs to be the father

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