All Comments on 'The Punishment Room Pt. 01'

this is a promising opening chapter to what could be an interesting longer story.

I prefer Reluctance stories rather than straight forward Non Con but I’m hoping that this is going to turn out to be a Consensual Non Consent scene/ situation.

I couldn’t find any errors in the translation at all.

Tess (UK)

I did not know one of the words in context as a native american english speaker. Everything else read to me a natural speech - so a great translation - I look forward to more.

Seriously, this is in the wrong category. While BDSM is involved, the fact is, she *cannot* consent while being kidnapped and held captive.

Dear all, thank you for the encouragement! Part two is now pending so will hopefully be published beginning next week and ...... spoiler alert (!): this is not for the hardcore buffs...;-)

Cheers,

Jonas

Thank you everyone for the encouragement! One member even sent me a review of the whole text with lots of hints, how to improve, thank you very much!

Part two is pending and will hopefully be released beginning next week.

(Spoiler Alert: this is not for the hardcore buffs ...;-)

Cheers

Jonas

Thank you for the feedback! I clearly have to learn about the finer points of categories in this forum.....

Quote: she *cannot* consent while being kidnapped and held captive /Quote

... yet I think that, in the end, I might still have chosen the right one... just wait and see....;-)

I'm enjoying the story so far. Anxious to see where it's going. I think your translation is excellent. Not perfect, but it's better than a lot of native English speakers write. I shall be watching for part 2.

This translation sounds A LOT better than many stories I've seen that were written by native speakers of English.

Interesting comments as to the consent/non-consent aspect. I haven't read beyond here so don't know where this is headed. I would not be surprised to discover at the end that this is a planned, consensual scene between two partners.