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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
back to the keyboard

This isn't a story. It's just a masturbation device. Learn to spell. Edit your stuff.

batman20003batman20003almost 5 years ago
Too bad

Great story hampered by a lack of editing or simple rereading. Your mind is sharp and provides wonderful pictures of hot unbridled sex. Please find someone to help with your final drafts.

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