All Comments on 'The Quarterback's Only Weakness Ch. 02'

I would reccomend trying to find an editor but other than that your story is really good. Good plot and good characters even if at times it does move a little too fast. Thanks for sharing it with us.

i liked it.poor lass.i hope he treats her right.

love it

Its been absolutely too long! I had been waiting for the next installment of this story! I loved it though...my only gripe is that it was too short...either way I can't wait to read more!

I am one and i'm willing to help. so email me when you get the chance.

Really, the storyline is great!

There are two things you need. Buy a dictionary (as in, paper, not spellcheck). Start with homonym". ("to" and "too" are not interchangeable)

Seriously, get an editor. It would make for a great storyline becoming a much better read.

It's a delightful story; don't let the small details diminish the finished product.