All Comments on 'The Quarterback's Wife'

That punchline at the end was cringe.

with someone who cheats? He'll deserve whatever he gets. Once she eats half of Tommy, he'll be her next meal ticket.

Do we even need to wonder why he's currently unmarried? Or if he is?

Nah, doesn't make a bit of difference to the plot, or the eventual outcome.

Thanks for the effort.

What has he been doing for twenty years? No ex-wives or kids? No time in prison? If he's been single for twenty years, what's wrong with him? You should have covered some of that.

i would like to se a second chapter.5*

Some of us get caught up in the circumstances and make mistakes, like she did. She gave it her best, tried to change him, and failed. She had the opportunity to test her wings before flying away, and her hero offered himself.

Having learned that good sex trumps dangerous sex with a fat cheater, she confirmed her decision to move on. I don’t see the delimma; she’s already made the commitment to divorce, he has been playing outside the marriage all along, so she makes her first time a test with a guy she knows.

Good story. Wonder if they do get together after the D?

For the read.

I much prefer when the wife isn't cheating. It would have been much hotter for her to go back to her room where her husband was waiting to hear all the details and then reclaim her.

Oh, yeah...26th NC sucks.

That had a lot of goodness:

- Getting back at the star QB who was deeply flawed;

- Good guy gets with beautiful gal;

- The future may be wonderful.

As much as this was a "Good guy gets beautiful woman" story, it might have been more exciting to have the protagonist's wife walk in on them,....

4*

I think that story deserves a second chapter. Liked what you offered.

I liked it, maybe a second chapter. 5*

Serious Bro-code violation for a guy who seemed so upstanding. Why was there no background of the MC? Single at the 20th reunion leaves a lot of questions

Finish the story with another chapter.

does need more. LP