Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'The Quiet Ones'

by D_rwc

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 1 Comment
papagrizpapagrizabout 13 years ago
A NICE SHORT STORY

you write pretty well and your story is smooth flowing, however, it is so short that it fails to achieve satisfaction in reading. Keep trying, put more effort into a true story and you will do well.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login

story TAGS

chance meeting