by FrumSexStories
A really well-written first chapter about interesting characters told from a very different viewpoint and life situation from what it usually posted here, or even elsewhere. Strong back stories and an unexpected plot development. Maybe in encouraging Rivka’s self-development the narrator ended up
not only helping her but did end up having his revenge as well. What they call in NY a “twofer.” More on his life, and hers, and their future relationship would be welcomed by this former New Yorker member of the tribe.
Not sure I really liked this story although I did give it a 4* rating. Maybe I was in the mind of the old Avraham who wanted a happy ending. Although I have a lesbian daughter and I care for both her partner (wife) and their adopted daughter, I still feel that a woman should be with a man. Rivka may well be happy, and Avraham may (probably will) find some form of happiness with a woman, but it would have been more comforting if Avraham's caring had brought Rivka to a less traditional pairing than her father wanted, with or without a match with him. 4*
A very compelling and insightful story. No argument here if there are additional stories about these characters.
He lost the girl of his dreams but found he still had a friend. Maybe he can put paid to the past and send the Rebbe pictures of his daughter's wedding. Put the pics up on Facebook too so the community can enjoy the nuptials.
Good story, but what of Avraham's father? If Rivka knows the truth, can't she help?
Yeah. Because no OJ story can end without the protagonist (a) going OTD, (b) discovering they're gay, (c) becoming a psychology major to figure themselves out. BORING!
@anon who had an issue with the story:
1) The protagonist doesn't go OTD
2) The protagonist isn't gay
3) He isn't a psychology major
His love interest is, but not him. Any other comments?
What reader1000 and cpl8140 Said.
An excellent romance, even if not traditional!