All Comments on 'The Ranger: Ch. 11'

So the wolves versus “Werewolves?” A few typos but the story is coming along nicely.

Not Werewolf i.e. NovusAnimus 'My Little Ventrue" 9'ft tall killing machines, but also not 'just' the DnD 5e Druid wildshape spell, as there is interaction with a sentient wolf, that shouldn't be happening.

Love the story. But there are some dropped pronouns and lost sentence structure

For example...

Bjorn laughs as he starts walking down the street towards the Viscounts office, he made a mage, and the council is working with him, things are getting interesting.....

He made a mage, and the council...

So he who and who is saying thinking it?

I woul think something like...

Viscount office thinking thak Kae sure is something, he made a mage and has the council....

Good luck I'm sure looking forward to the next chapter

I have enjoyed these first 11 chapters. Keep them coming.

Good stuff! Only criticism has already been said below. Some editing and sentence structure. Keep it going please

Love this series of stories. The comment I would make is to please add a bit more locational information or some dashed lines between paragraphs to indicate a significant change. It gets difficult at times to follow the flow.