All Comments on 'The Ravishment of Melody'

The story was well written and the plot was enthralling, but I have very mixed feelings about it. I think you were successful in what you were trying to write. Thanks

Got her pretty good there!

Exceedingly well written and just a shade uncomfortable, just as a story like should be.

Well done.

This is super hot and you are an incredible writer! I love how well you fleshed out both characters. They feel like real people, not just porn stars or blow up dolls and that makes it have much more impact for me. The gangbang was my favorite part of the scene - 'Big Mike', oh my god O.O

That cute first scene in the kitchen was great too.

I'm surprised that you're new to writing rape fantasy because this pretty much hit it on the head. Amazing work!

Wow..hot action.not my favourite scenes

Guess she accepted it as their mutual acceptance of their fantasies!

I think you did a very good job to create a scenario where such a fantasy can be lived out. Even though it was pretty clear soon, that Candy was big Mike.